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Dear Katie and Mark
I hope all is well with You.
I'm writing to tell you that they do not come to you for a short break in June because I broke my leg.I very sorry ,but I do not arrive within the agreed period. I will tell you how I broke my leg.I rode the bike and did not notice the broken tree. The doktor at the hospital he founded my cast. I have it four weeks, and after next week I have come to control.We have to move my arrival to you about six weeks. Can I come fifth day of July ,if you do not have other plans for holiday? If you agree to this?.I look forward to your reply.
All the best.
L
lidag

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Dear Katie and Mark,
I hope that all is well at you.
I'm writing to tell you that they do not come on a short break in June.
Recently I have broken my leg. I'm very sorry, but we can't arrive
within the agreed period.
I tell you how I have broken my leg. When I was riding on a bike I didn't notice a broken tree. A doctor at the hospital put my leg in cast.
I have had it for four weeks, and after next week I have to go to
a control. We have to move our arrival to you about six weeks.
If you do not have other plans for holiday, we may come the fifth of July.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
All the best,
"lidag"

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TopMan - Zenku oczywiscie,ze pomogles :)
- 14 lat temu
lidag - Dzięki za podpowiedź, bardzo mi była pomocna :) - 14 lat temu

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