Czy mógłby to ktoś przetłumaczyć ?

Ja się odważyłam. Pewnie powiecie chłopakowi że ma pisać sam a on jak by umiał to by przecież napisał:) Musze go trochę bronić (in advance):)

Niech ktoś poprawi to po mnie:

My favourite season is summer. I like it becouse of the warmth. Everything around is colourful and full of life. People are happy. In (the) summer I can afford to spend my free time nicely, walking in the parks or the Old Town. I feel completely relaxed then. When I want to spend my time actively I ride a bike, go to the pool or play football with my friends. In the evenings I go out with my friends to the some restaurant or some pub, we can enjoy there some tea, some coffe or some drink. What makes (the) summer than other seasons of the year is that people are heaving fun, grilling or basking in the sun. I like spending my free time in this way.

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Pewnie jakieś błedy są u mnie ale fajne ćwiczenie jeśli ma się trochę czasu. My favourite season is summer. I like this time of year because it is the warmest time.
Everything around is colourful and full of life. People are happy. In the summer I can afford a nice leisure time walking in the parks, or walking around the old town of Warsaw. Then I feel completely relaxed.
When I want to actively spend free time I get on the bike and go swimming or playing football with my friends. In the evenings I go out with friends to a cafe or pub, where we can talk and drink coffee, tea or a drink. What makes summer than other seasons of the year is that everyone else is having fun, grill, or bask in the sun.I enjoy spending my free time in this way.