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Dear Ann,

I'm extremely sorry, I didn't response you so long time. I was learning for my mock exams, which were in December.
There was my grandma's name day in December also. My mother organised a huge party, invited the whole family and ordered me to help her with arranging everything. I found it terribly boring, especially that I had to look after my young cousins whom I hate. You won't believe how malicious are they!
I have a bad piece of news for you. We went to ski to the Czech Republic last Sunday and unfortunately Sara has broken her leg, so she is unable to go with us to Zimbabwe during the winter holidays.
How are you and your firends, Ann? Write me back as soon as possible.

Hugs, Kate.

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Dear XXX,

I'm extremely sorry I didn't write to you for such a long time. I was learning for my mock exams which were in December. It was my grandma's name day in December also. My mother organised a huge party, invited the whole family and asked me to help her with arranging everything. I found it terribly boring, especially that I had to look after my younger cousins whom I hate. You won't believe how malicious they are!

I have a piece of bad news for you. We went to ski to the Czech Republic last Sunday and unfortunately Sara broke her leg, so she is unable to go with us to Zimbabwe during the winter holidays.

How are you and your friends?

Write me back as soon as possible.

Hugs,

Kate

paulina_r

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14 lat temuzmieniany: 14 lat temu

Bal32bina - Myślę,że przydały by się się jeszcze dwie poprawki: 'organized' a nie 'organised', a także 'You wont believe...', a nie 'You won't believe...'Pozostałe ok. - 14 lat temu

paulina_r - "organised" to brytyjska pisownia słowa "organized", dlatego jest OK. "You won't believe..." jest jak najbardziej w porządku - forma "wont" w tym wypadku jest niepoprawna (jest to rzeczownik lub przymiotnik) - 14 lat temu zmieniany: 14 lat temu

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