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Sara is a wonderful girl. We have a lot in common. I really like her. She's very smart. She has long, blonde hair and green eyes. She's 27 years old, but she looks very young. She's an English teacher. She lives in London, but comes from Poland. Her grandmother lives in Wrocław. Sara is staying in her flat now.

She has a brother and a sister. Her sister lives in London with their parents. Her brother lives in Warsaw. I saw his picture. He looks like Sara.

Sara likes to travel. Her favourite cities are Wrocław and Paris.