After school i visited my friend.When i was coming home i saw scary huge,black dog. He suddenly went nearer to me and he was staring at me.I saw his sharp teeth.i was really scared.Fortunately i managed run away.
dog => a dog
scary huge black dog => a scary huge black dog
... and he was staring at me. => ... and he started staring at me.
Fortunately i managed run away. => Fortunately I managed to run away.
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