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  artbud

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  Could someone please check my work

  Hello Mark,
  I am going to play tennis in the afternoon. Would you like to go with me. On the radio they talking about the weather now. It is going to be nice afternoon and the wind is very weak today. I think play tennis with you will be great fun for both sides me and you and our friends will have a lot of fun if they decided to go with us.
  If possible write me at once what do you think about it? By the way,Have you seen my balls anywhere? I do not know where they are. I hope that it is very good idea to play tennis in such a beautiful day and all that counts is friendship and good fun. I am waiting for your response.......

  Hello Mark, I am going to play tennis in the afternoon. Would you like to go with me. On the radio they talking about the weather now. It is going to be nice afternoon and the wind is very weak today. I think play tennis with you will be great fun for both sides me and you and our friends will have a lot of fun if they decided to go with us. If possible write me at once what do you think about it? By the way,Have you seen my balls anywhere? I do not know where they are. I hope that it is very good idea to play tennis in such a beautiful day and all that counts is friendship and good fun. I am waiting for your response.......
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  Bilberry

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  świetnie piszesz, ciekawy tekst, nie boisz się używać trudniejszych zwrotów - tak trzymać
  
  they talking => they were talking
  the weather now => current weather
  I think play => I think playing
  both sides me and you => both: me and you
  
  podoba mi się fragment
  Have you seen my balls...
  można zrozumieć dwuznacznie ;)

  świetnie piszesz, ciekawy tekst, nie boisz się używać trudniejszych zwrotów - tak trzymać they talking => they were talking the weather now => current weather I think play => I think playing both sides me and you => both: me and you podoba mi się fragment Have you seen my balls... można zrozumieć dwuznacznie ;)

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  artbud Thank you for your help - All the best !!! Tue, 7 Feb 2012 15:06:24 +0100

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  TopMan

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  > On the radio they talking about the weather now.
  
  On the radio they are now talking about the weather lub
  On the radio they were talking about the weather.

  > On the radio they talking about the weather now. On the radio they **are now** talking about the weather lub On the radio they **were talking** about the weather.

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  artbud Thanks - Have a nice day !!! Thu, 9 Feb 2012 13:32:39 +0100

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  dorotapietrak

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  Zamiast "On the radio they talking about the weather now" proponuję: On the radio they are talking about the current weather.

  Zamiast "On the radio they talking about the weather now" proponuję: On the radio they are talking about the current weather.

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  artbud Hello,Dorota,nice to meet you! Thu, 9 Feb 2012 19:04:11 +0100

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