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natala0107
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Wiem,że z sprawdzaniem wypracowań do tekstów bardziej ale się tam nie da...

Hi Maia,

How are you?

I'm writing to you because our friends Kate celebrate twenty-first birthday at next weekend.

Maybe you want buying present with me?
I'm going buy a present on the weekend.

Do you have any idea to gets she?
I note that she like lisning to music so maybe we order ticket to concert her favourite band?
What do you think it?

Where we find this ticket...?

Concot something,please!

I'll call you at Thursday.

Bye

XYZ

Hi Maia, How are you? I'm writing to you because our friends Kate celebrate twenty-first birthday at next weekend. Maybe you want buying present with me? I'm going buy a present on the weekend. Do you have any idea to gets she? I note that she like lisning to music so maybe we order ticket to concert her favourite band? What do you think it? Where we find this ticket...? Concot something,please! I'll call you at Thursday. Bye XYZ
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paulina2701

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Fri, 3 Feb 2012 23:16:55 +0100

Ja Ci czasów poprawiać nie będę, bo nie czuję się kompetentna, ale:
- koleżanka powinna być w liczbie pojedynczej
- po "want" dajemy "to" + forma podstawowa
- zamierzam kupic- I'm going to buy
- jeszcze raz po "to" forma podstawowa, a więc "get", chociaż jak się domyślam miałaś na myśli "give her"
- listening
- What do you think of it?
- "concoct" pewnie miało być ;)
- on Thursday

natala0107 literówki to się nazywa przepisywanie z kartki na kompa ;p
Fri, 3 Feb 2012 23:22:20 +0100

paulina2701 Nie tłumacz się literówkami, bo nie o to tu chodzi. A jak nie będzie literówek to może prędzej Ci ktoś grubsze błędy wytknie :)
Fri, 3 Feb 2012 23:27:37 +0100

paulina2701 Mam pomysł. Popraw te swoje "literówki" w odpowiedzi poniżej, a może znajdzie się ktoś, kto zechce skorygować resztę? :)
Sat, 4 Feb 2012 00:30:27 +0100

natala0107 poprawione ;)
Sat, 4 Feb 2012 11:05:57 +0100

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natala0107
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Sat, 4 Feb 2012 11:05:35 +0100
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Hi Maia,

How are you?

I'm writing to you because our friend Kate celebrate twenty-first birthday at next weekend.

Maybe you want to buy present with me?
I'm going to buy a present on the weekend.

Do you have any idea to give her ?
I note that she like listening to music so maybe we order ticket to concert her favourite band?
What do you think of it?

Where we find this ticket...?

Concoct something,please!

I'll call you on Thursday.

Bye

XYZ

Hi Maia, How are you? I'm writing to you because our friend Kate celebrate twenty-first birthday at next weekend. Maybe you want to buy present with me? I'm going to buy a present on the weekend. Do you have any idea to give her ? I note that she like listening to music so maybe we order ticket to concert her favourite band? What do you think of it? Where we find this ticket...? Concoct something,please! I'll call you on Thursday. Bye XYZ

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Sat, 4 Feb 2012 14:17:03 +0100

Pamiętaj, że nie istnieje jedna poprawna wersja - wiele rzeczy zależy od intencji piszącego. Starałam się poprawić jak najmniej. Zrobiłabym to tak:

Hi Maia!

How are you?

I'm writing to you because our friend Kate is celebrating twenty-first birthday next weekend.

Maybe you want to buy a present for her with me?
I'm going to buy it on the weekend.

Do you have any idea what to give her?
I noted that she likes listening to music so maybe we can order a ticket to a concert of her favorite band?
What do you think of it?

Where do we find this ticket...?

Concoct something, please!

I'll call you on Thursday.

Bye

XYZ

Am: on the weekend & favorite
Br: at the weekend & favourite

natala0107 Dzięki ;))
Sat, 4 Feb 2012 20:49:08 +0100